Hey there . . . well, you asked for my critique, so, what I feel is that you need to spend a bit more time on the values. I think you could get darker around the eyes nose and mouth . . . and focus a bit more on the anatomy of the face, folds in the skin about the eyes and so forth. You've got a nice look, but it doesn't quite feel finished to me. And I think you could push the horns a bit more too, they don't read as strong as they could and it may read more clear with bigger horns?
Coming along though, keep at it and you'll get it!
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te gek! prive werk?
yes. maar ik ga m denk ik naar wat kranten sturen.
Afgebeeld zoals iedereen hem zou moeten zien...
Ongelovelijk dat het niet zo is
Hey there . . . well, you asked for my critique, so, what I feel is that you need to spend a bit more time on the values. I think you could get darker around the eyes nose and mouth . . . and focus a bit more on the anatomy of the face, folds in the skin about the eyes and so forth. You've got a nice look, but it doesn't quite feel finished to me. And I think you could push the horns a bit more too, they don't read as strong as they could and it may read more clear with bigger horns?
Coming along though, keep at it and you'll get it!
Gaaf gedaan hoor Arne!
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